Really I was about to write how Molly could have been so much better for this spread. Brittani is slightly thinner, taller and younger (that's the only thing that made it possible for her to beat Molly), but Molly photographs much better, mainly up-close.
^Jokes? I've never seen a picture from seventeen magazine that didn't have a bland white background, ridiculously bright colors, overkill smiling and body language and thrown together tween outfits (most notably brightly colored prom dresses). This is to seventeen as piranhas are to Venus, as in there's no real connection between the two.
I think this editing job is fine. Its just the concept that kinda bores me. Its very nice but kinda lacking and its been done way too many times before.
I really kinda wish you hadn't said anything about the whole Seventeen Magazine. It took me so long to force that out of my mind, and now all I can think of at this moment is random zooming in and out of Ann Shoket's horrifying smile.