I'd like this shot a great deal more if Eboni's face were a little more in profile and if there were a slightly greater sense of repose and casualness.
from the chest down, this pose is just insane. The upright and stiff right arm coupled with the tense face and the static left hand ruin it though. She should've bent her arm a little and relaxed her face even if for a second, just so the shot wouldn't look so forced.
you guys don't know what you're talking about. This is a phenomenal photograph. Very outside the box, makes the clothes look great, has a strong expression.