^She doesn't need better lighting, she clearly didn't find the light. There is tons of lighting on the right side. Anyway, thumbnail looks great but really looks horrible. Only thing good is the long, flowing tran. She looks stiff and constipated.
^Learn to respect others opinions; you'll get nowhere in life if you drag around thinking your always right and everyone else is wrong, and you won't take the time to listen to what others have to say.
Just the upper body is good in this photo. Her legs look short and therefore she looks short, unfortunately. She still is bringing the courtesan face though.